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torylltales ([personal profile] torylltales) wrote in [community profile] antishurtugal_reborn2021-05-30 07:15 pm

To Sleep - part 6 chapters AND appendices / end papers

Here we are folks, the final chapters in this ridiculously huge and impressively empty doorstopper. I have to say, I am seriously impressed that we've collectively got through this in less than a year. Previous sporks (Brisingr, for example) have gone well over a year.

Although I think part of that is just the sheer lack of anything to critique. The story is so empty and so repetitive that our sporks were repeating each other's points by chapter 3 onwards.

Unfortunately there's only two chapters up for grabs in the final part, as 1 and 3 were dibsed in advance.


PART SIX: QUIETUS

Recognition - torylltales and snarkbotanya
Unity - ultimate cheetah
Decession - epistler
Exeunt VI - ultimate cheetah



After this we just have the appendices, acknowledgements, and author's note/afterword.


ADDENDUM
Appendix I: Spacetime & FTL
Appendix II: Ship-Based Combat in Space
Appendix III: Terminology - mara_dienne
Appendix IV: Timeline - mara_dienne


AFTERWORD & ACKNOWLEDGMENTS - epistler, torylltales, snarkbotanya, ultimate cheetah
 



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[personal profile] epistler 2021-05-30 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
I vote that you, me and Anya tackle the Afterword together. It deserves our full attention.
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[personal profile] epistler 2021-05-30 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't see why not!
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[personal profile] ultimate_cheetah 2021-05-31 03:23 am (UTC)(link)

Yaay!

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[personal profile] ultimate_cheetah 2021-05-30 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)

I'll take Unity and Exeunt VI.

[personal profile] hidden_urchin 2021-05-30 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)

I salute all of you who had fare more fortitude than I. I noped out on reading the source material after the first chapter! (However, I have enjoyed every spork, even when I haven't commented. Variations on "how the hell was this published" get boring.) :D

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[personal profile] uueiaa 2021-05-30 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
*shakes himself awake, drooling*

Hngwhat?... we almost there?...
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[personal profile] mara_dienne459 2021-05-30 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought someone already claimed the spacetime/FTL and ship-based combat in space sections?

Also, if they’re able to be sporked, we’ll take the last few sections - the terminology and the timeline, unless someone else wants them.
Edited 2021-05-31 02:36 (UTC)
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[personal profile] cmdrnemo 2021-07-02 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I could probably blather on about them for a bit if no one else signs up.