The story is so bogged down in unnecessary minutiae of the characters’ daily lives and activities that the actual story is lost in the clutter. Paolini shows that he still does not have any discipline as a writer, and still doesn’t know what to write and what not to write. What is, to quote Paolini himself, “essential story elements”, and what is useless filler that bogs the story down.
I cannot wait to see his online class coming up soon.
Instead, I can only think that this is meant to be a veiled reference to Starship Troopers.
That or a Aliens reference. Could be both at the same time.
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I cannot wait to see his online class coming up soon.
That or a Aliens reference. Could be both at the same time.