ultimate_cheetah: Ra'zac with a skull (Default)
ultimate_cheetah ([personal profile] ultimate_cheetah) wrote in [community profile] antishurtugal_reborn 2021-03-08 11:09 pm (UTC)

Eragon often felt like shouting that they were being blind fools

Wow, nice ableism, Paolini. Totally needed to toss the word "blind" in there.

So Eragon went to Ellesmera and got trained, fought in the battle of the Burning Plains, sacked the Ra’zac’s home and murdered them all, tortured Sloan, killed an innocent boy-soldier begging for his life, and made it here to this moment ALL IN THREE FUCKING MONTHS? Are you KIDDING me?

Many LARPS literally have a better time scale than this.

He allowed his gaze to drift around the granite table,...

Holy shit, that's a monster of a sentence. And we won't see most of these people again.


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