That's really bad. I've barely skimmed it and it's already so bad.
1. One of the demons ends up becoming a butler (oh how I wish I were kidding) Hope they keep an eye on him.
(might I remind you, both WolfStar AND StarDrifter are her GRANDFATHERS). Great. but then Zenith just dies anyway. After all the trouble they went to in Sinner, with her being stuck in a literal ghost town, and escaping hurt like hell, and the stuff with Niah being forced into a baby...she just dies. Which means all that was completely unnecessary. Axis gets a random pet lizard Just like the snow eagle who was FreeFall all along or something like that.
and later still turns out to be "light and love incarnate" or some such bullshit Of course, the Power of Wuv reigns supreme.
and helps them Deus Ex Machina the big villain (StarLaughter's baby) to death From what I've seen, by eating him in graphic detail. Lovely. And the dead baby was used as a new body for Qeteb?
StarLaughter goes even further off the rails Not so strange if you've been stuck in a void for three thousand years.
and they end up stuck floating in the void bickering with each other for the rest of eternity. Nice.
Except StarDrifter escapes to a foreign country so we have to put up with even more of his rapist bullshit in the next trilogy Of course. And is there a third trilogy? I really hope not, because if there is, I've got to read it too.
From what I've seen, the first trilogy is still quite coherent. It's pretty bad, but at least there still is an understandable plot. But the second trilogy... I guess the main danger are the Assrape Demons who will "lay waste to the earth", but it still comes off as really incoherent.
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Hope they keep an eye on him.
Great.
After all the trouble they went to in Sinner, with her being stuck in a literal ghost town, and escaping hurt like hell, and the stuff with Niah being forced into a baby...she just dies. Which means all that was completely unnecessary.
Just like the snow eagle who was FreeFall all along or something like that.
Of course, the Power of Wuv reigns supreme.
From what I've seen, by eating him in graphic detail. Lovely. And the dead baby was used as a new body for Qeteb?
Not so strange if you've been stuck in a void for three thousand years.
Nice.
Of course. And is there a third trilogy? I really hope not, because if there is, I've got to read it too.
From what I've seen, the first trilogy is still quite coherent. It's pretty bad, but at least there still is an understandable plot. But the second trilogy... I guess the main danger are the Assrape Demons who will "lay waste to the earth", but it still comes off as really incoherent.