Angela's writing...It's really pretentious and most of it barely makes sense in context. But there's a scene with Elva in there and the dialogue is a good deal more natural than most of Paolini's. The title was "On the Nature of the Stars", by the way (didn't really have anything much to do with the content).
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Here (hope the links work):
https://antishurtugal-reborn.dreamwidth.org/85446.html
https://antishurtugal-reborn.dreamwidth.org/86769.html
https://antishurtugal-reborn.dreamwidth.org/87207.html
Angela's writing...It's really pretentious and most of it barely makes sense in context. But there's a scene with Elva in there and the dialogue is a good deal more natural than most of Paolini's. The title was "On the Nature of the Stars", by the way (didn't really have anything much to do with the content).