I got the exact same feeling when I read Inheritance - not only was the tone constantly full of boredom and indifference but you could tell he was barely even bothering to pay attention to what he was writing. The whole thing was utterly disjointed.
Inheritance reads like he was writing entirely by the seat of his pants and not bothering to go back and make necessary changes, which is probably how he ended up with shit like the very rightfully cut swashbuckler scene.
Indeed, and "she was just waiting to make sure it wasn't one of Galby's tricks" reads like another lame excuse.
In my mind, this is how Saphira rationalizes what happened, not what actually went through her head at the time.
Even less so than it was in Sword and Shadow, where he went out like a complete bitch. XD
Indeed... No spoilers, though! I know I've worked out the details of his terrible demise with you and Toryll, but I want other people to experience the horror as it comes.
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Inheritance reads like he was writing entirely by the seat of his pants and not bothering to go back and make necessary changes, which is probably how he ended up with shit like the very rightfully cut swashbuckler scene.
Indeed, and "she was just waiting to make sure it wasn't one of Galby's tricks" reads like another lame excuse.
In my mind, this is how Saphira rationalizes what happened, not what actually went through her head at the time.
Even less so than it was in Sword and Shadow, where he went out like a complete bitch. XD
Indeed... No spoilers, though! I know I've worked out the details of his terrible demise with you and Toryll, but I want other people to experience the horror as it comes.