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nounless ([personal profile] nounless) wrote in [community profile] antishurtugal_reborn 2022-04-18 12:24 am (UTC)

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes! A new chapter! Keep up the amazing work!

I absolutely adore the relationship between Vanora, Verja, Murtagh, and Thorn. So wholesome. I’m almost scared to see where the plot with Saphira’s Eldunarí is going, so good job on that bit of tension :). Your handling of morals is excellent and not over-the-top.

I honestly don’t have any criticism (or at least none at the moment). This chapter was really well done and I can’t wait for the next!

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