"Now, a small team must land and journey on foot across the surface to learn who built the hole and why. ... For some the mission is the dream of the lifetime, for others a risk not worth taking..."
Who assembled this team? Were they just the closest to the site? Why wouldn't they all be excited to investigate? What's so risky? I ask out of confusion, not intrigue.
"Each step they take toward the mysterious abyss is more punishing than the last. And the ghosts of their past follow."
So...the story is about GETTING to the abyss?
Edit to say: I wonder if this is a horror story? It seems focused on the characters and the ghosts of their pasts, which seems like he's trying something new.
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Who assembled this team? Were they just the closest to the site? Why wouldn't they all be excited to investigate? What's so risky? I ask out of confusion, not intrigue.
"Each step they take toward the mysterious abyss is more punishing than the last. And the ghosts of their past follow."
So...the story is about GETTING to the abyss?
Edit to say: I wonder if this is a horror story? It seems focused on the characters and the ghosts of their pasts, which seems like he's trying something new.