ultimate_cheetah: Ra'zac with a skull (Default)
ultimate_cheetah ([personal profile] ultimate_cheetah) wrote in [community profile] antishurtugal_reborn 2023-11-29 02:58 am (UTC)

Are you on the chapter where Murtagh meets Bachel? If so, the plot doesn't get into gear until the chapter "The Bad Sleep Well".

Also, there's so many feasts that I was legit wondering how this tiny-ass village has all this food. They should have run out, I swear.

It's become painfully obvious that he doesn't know how to put his protagonist into dangerous situations without making him so over the top dumb and klutzy (seriously, how many times has this "expert warrior and talented dancer" fallen on his arse so far? Last time he literally landed in a pile of shit) that it's become straight up cartoonish.

Well, you have to be creative if you want to think about situations that would challenge a smart character.

Also, he does dumb things that are not supposed to be dumb.


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