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ssbob90 ([personal profile] ssbob90) wrote in [community profile] antishurtugal_reborn 2019-04-05 05:36 am (UTC)

This is in, to me, the lost annoying chapter.

What personally angers me is queen islanti crying a single tear. I know that panani wants to show the elves as stoic but show her sad. But this is dumb, she just heard her daughter tortured, by rights she should be bawling her eyes out, or least show more then an unimpressed face, for what happen to her and that she still alive. But this single tears gives, to me, the unfortunate implication that her sorrow is false. That she didn't care what happened to her and shed a tear just to look like she cares.

And a minor nitpick I have is about the feast they serve. Because blueberry soup sound weird, which also brings the though of how every fantasy story lacks dental hygiene especially if sugar exist.

Do they “sing” their weapons as well. In a way yes as islanti gave erg a bow singed from a tree.

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