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Eragon: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Thieves in the Castle (Part I)
( Planning? Of course not! )
( Planning? Of course not! )
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Solembum gave Eragon some vague advice, Eragon discussed that with Saphira, and Brom decided to teach Eragon how to read.
( Some setup so we can actually go look at the records. )
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Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon had his fortune told in a rather dubious manner which revealed all too much. For the reader post:
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon went into Angela’s shop and met with Solembum, who treated him rather badly.
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, we saw the book Domia abr Wyrda, and Eragon and Brom talked a bit about scrying and what Galbatorix would supposedly do. For the reader post:
( This book has a serious abuse problem. )
( How can you expect to give Eragon good advice when you barely understand the situation, Brom? )
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Brom and Jeod had a mysterious conversation, we learned the Empire is quite incompetent, and Helen had some pettiness directed at her. For the reader post:
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, we met Angela and then Jeod and we learned a bit more about Brom’s past.
HISC: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, I made an overview of several chapters of the self-published edition. For the reader post:
( Some introductions, nothing more, unfortunately. )
Corneille Noire: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon, Brom and Saphira reached Teirm, Saphira was abusive to Eragon again, and Eragon and Brom found some information in a seedy tavern.
( This is quite a mess, but better next time, I suppose. )
Corneille Noire: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, we had a frankly mind-numbing travel chapter that could not get its travel right at all. For the reader post:
( A pity I cannot taste the saveur locale; I might just like it. )
Fumurti: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, we learned about Seithr oil, and Brom and Eragon came up with a quite convoluted way to find the Ra’zac based on that.
( This is one of the shortest chapters of the book, and one of the worst. If only Paolini would check his map and do some research... )
Fumurti: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon went out flying with Saphira, and we discovered that the Ra’zac have left!
( Time to go do something and go places (with lots of talk about acid). )
Fumurti: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Saphira abused Eragon into flying with her, and Eragon used Zar’roc in training for the first time. For the reader post:
( Reader Post & Reflections )
With that done, let me begin with the next chapter!
( Eragon & Saphira go flying (with some nasty mental tricks)! )
Fumurti: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, our company reached Daret, and managed to reprovision with some trouble. Now for the reader post:
( Reader Post & Reflections )
Either way, let me go on with the rest of the chapter, then!
( This is the beginning of “Saphira is exempt from wrongdoing”, unfortunately. )
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon learned magic and the ancient language, and our company went very slow.
I do not actually have anything concrete for the reader post, so let me give this to Fumurti, then. (leaves)
Fumurti: Well, I’m feeling quite capable again, so let me begin with the next chapter!
( The reception is very silly, but the spokesman is one of the more distinctive characters of the book. )
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon and Brom talked quite a bit about magic.
For the reader post:
( Reader Post & Reflections )
Well, let me do the rest of the chapter, then!
( Do you truly think you can catch the Ra'zac at three kilometres per day? )
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Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, we learned the very basics of magic.
Now for the reader post:
( Reader Post & Reflections )
Let me begin the next chapter, then!
( While the magic itself is quite simple, untangling what we learn is everything but. )
Kerlois: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon and Brom left Yazuac and that is about all that happened.
Now for the reader post:
( Reader Post & Reflections )
Well, let me do the rest of the chapter, then!
( Our first explanations of magic. )
Corneille Noire: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to Eragon! Last time, Eragon killed a crow and killed two Urgals. Now for the reader post:
Kerlois: Let us begin with the next chapter, then.
( There is not that much to say here, but we still ramble on longer than the chapter itself. )