regarding your cut text,I think it would be better if chapter 4 WAS anguish, instead of this... bland nothingness. This space fantasy gruel. Except that's actually an insult to gruel, which despite modern negative connotations was (and still is) a nutritious class of staple foods pretty much across the entire world.
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Date: 2020-07-19 01:17 am (UTC)This is less tasty and less filling than gruel.