I think Paolini should stick to writing teenagers, personally, and not try to pretend they're "mature".
A (mature) adult would likely have a lot more perspective and stoicism than Kiragon displays.
This could work if it was established that Kiragon was traumatized as hell, but we all know how good Paolini is at writing that.
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Date: 2020-10-24 09:01 pm (UTC)I think Paolini should stick to writing teenagers, personally, and not try to pretend they're "mature".
A (mature) adult would likely have a lot more perspective and stoicism than Kiragon displays.
This could work if it was established that Kiragon was traumatized as hell, but we all know how good Paolini is at writing that.