Red Brick Commentary

[mara_dienne459]

In which a problem swiftly becomes a Significant Problem with Dire Consequences. Honestly, other than plopping gratuitous violence into this story for Reasons, I'm not sure what logic this chapter has going for it. 


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TsiaSoSpork: Part 1, Chapter 4: Anguish

[silverskyfeather]

TsiaSoSpork: Part 1, Chapter 4: Anguish

Nobody aboard this spaceship understand seizure first aid, which made me personally angry. In a lesser note, the extras all die this chapter and we’ve all wasted our time reading about them. Who told Paolini to write extra words, again?
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Swear Count:
Pissed (1)
Shit (1) (cut-off midway)
Overall: 2
Book’s Count: 28