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Red Brick Commentary
Oct. 12th, 2020 06:35 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mara_dienne459We're still with our main hero. We're still traveling. It's still boring.
( Doorway to the Forest Realm )
( Doorway to the Forest Realm )Oct. 12th, 2020
mara_dienne459mara_dienne459In which there's a lot of bad science and I suppose the stuff contained in the chapter was supposed to be exciting? But really it just reads as a checklist of "give the heroine a tense situation to live through" because there's actually no sense of tension at all.
( In Space, No One Can Hear You Scream )
( In Space, No One Can Hear You Scream )torylltalesIf you haven’t read part one yet, check it out here: https://antishurtugal-reborn.dreamwidth.org/152706.html
I highly recommend you read the first part before this one, because I won’t be re-explaining the nonsense from part 1 again.
As a bit of a palate-cleanser from all the Paolni and To Sleep we've been focusing on lately, I thought I'd dive back into this self-published, self-illustrated, self-edited... "story". All bold-face quotes are verbatim from the story, including spelling and punctuation.
( Oh God Why )A Conversation Between Authors
Oct. 12th, 2020 09:14 pmmara_dienne459 So I was perusing the interwebs and managed to find myself a PDF version of To Sleep. It had an interesting tidbit at the end of it. I'm not sure if anyone else found it, and I'm not sure why it's included, but upon reading it I couldn't not make commentary about it...
( Two Guys Talk About High Word Counts )
( Two Guys Talk About High Word Counts )
