Green Brick Commentary

[mara_dienne459]

 More exposition and more anger-inducing textual evidence of exactly why it's a bad idea to bring the Riders back in the exact same way, shape, and form they were before they were all murderized by the series' so-called "bad guy" and his friends.

( What a Wonderful Phrase )

Restitution: Chapter One-The Heartland

[pangolin20]

Alternative title: Sometimes, Fables Tell Truth.

Here is the first real chapter.
Some notes: I think Nasuada behaves really weird in canon, and I thought it would be time to integrate that into the story. Also, I brought back some characters, like that one woman who disappears forever halfway through Inheritance. And I made some new (although very minor) characters.

One final note:
I will be posting relatively small chapters relatively often. That works a lot better to me.

( Hey, look who are back! )

Comments and critiques are most welcome!