I agree Gertrude although 100% in the background was relatable as the classic healer. She does make somwhat of an appearance when Eragon heals up Hope, the child with the cleft palate, and I thought her quite likeable there. I have actually suffered through all four now five of the books You've made it, at least.
Hope things settle down for you soon. It doesn't matter if you're here only sporadically. I like your comments regardless.
I have also gained some ideas from Oblakom's articles. In fact, I am going to use some of them in my own fic.
I started to read your fic earlier today but I don’t know where it is headed yet. Like is Eragon is going be good or bad. (I read chapter 2 not chapter 1 yet) Eragon is going to be good. I basically removed the manipulation from the dead dragons and from now on he and Saphira can make their own decisions, which will firmly place them on the better side of things.
Anyway directing Eragon has been a dream for me since I was a teenager so officially or unofficially I am creating my adaptation. Changing the media is a big plus since it shortens the story and is imagery and dialogue based. With an Eragon adaptation less is more. Nice! Shortening the story is something every Inheritance adaptation should do.
As for the issues to fix, I'll send you some ideas.
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Date: 2022-04-20 06:26 pm (UTC)She does make somwhat of an appearance when Eragon heals up Hope, the child with the cleft palate, and I thought her quite likeable there.
You've made it, at least.
Hope things settle down for you soon. It doesn't matter if you're here only sporadically. I like your comments regardless.
I have also gained some ideas from Oblakom's articles. In fact, I am going to use some of them in my own fic.
Eragon is going to be good. I basically removed the manipulation from the dead dragons and from now on he and Saphira can make their own decisions, which will firmly place them on the better side of things.
Nice! Shortening the story is something every Inheritance adaptation should do.
As for the issues to fix, I'll send you some ideas.