Paolini doesn't seem to understand the full implications of being 100% of the time mind-linked with someone. Even with a human it would be horrible, but with a non-human? A human in this situation should be creeped out. Paolini himself seems to have forgotten that his bond is deeper that simple telepathy.
Also, dragons need to be back at the center of the story. Saphira barely influences Eragon. In my story the Forsworn's arc is centered on their dragons, who are more important for them than Saphira ever was for Eragon.
There's something funny about having a hero treating his sane dragon a flying horse and the villains treating their mad dragons with all the care they can give them.
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Date: 2019-09-14 01:00 pm (UTC)Also, dragons need to be back at the center of the story. Saphira barely influences Eragon. In my story the Forsworn's arc is centered on their dragons, who are more important for them than Saphira ever was for Eragon.
There's something funny about having a hero treating his sane dragon a flying horse and the villains treating their mad dragons with all the care they can give them.